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Re: draft release announcement
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Cameron Horsburgh |
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Re: draft release announcement |
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Thu, 2 Nov 2006 08:36:23 +1100 |
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On Wed, Nov 01, 2006 at 08:44:13PM +0100, Han-Wen Nienhuys wrote:
> Cameron Horsburgh escreveu:
> >Hmm, I'm still not happy with the first sentence! How about:
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> >***
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> >The initial inspiration for LilyPond came ten years ago when two
> >musician friends grew disappointed with the bland and boring look of
> >computer generated scores.
> >
> >***
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> I used formatted iso. generated. GEnerated sounds a bit nerdy.
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Good
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> >Also, the comma after 'improvements' should be replaced by a semi-colon.
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> rather a colon ?
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Gah --- I'm always mixing those two up. You're right of course.
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