Re: Doc: cautionary accidentals after a key change (3000) (issue 6872049)

[tdanielsmusic]

https://codereview.appspot.com/6872049/diff/2001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely
File Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely (right):

https://codereview.appspot.com/6872049/diff/2001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3301
Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:3301: cautionary
accidentals printed at an explicit key change when
On 2012/12/03 07:30:36, Keith wrote:
> "does not remove the naturals printed at a key change if these
naturals are the
> only indication of the change:"

> I did not recognize the naturals as 'cautionary'.  The clause with
"since that"
> overwhelmed my English-grammar comprehension.
I'll simplify it along the lines you suggest.  I think
I'll use "cancelling accidentals printed at a key change",
but I'd like to still mention C major and A minor
explicitly to make sure this rather subtle point is clear.

https://codereview.appspot.com/6872049/diff/2001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3318
Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:3318: the visibility of
the @code{KeyCancellation} grob itself:
On 2012/12/03 08:56:25, dak wrote:
> It still would warrant moving "instead" to the end of the sentence.

OK.

https://codereview.appspot.com/6872049/diff/2001/Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely#newcode3318
Documentation/notation/changing-defaults.itely:3318: the visibility of
the @code{KeyCancellation} grob itself:
On 2012/12/03 07:30:36, Keith wrote:
> You might want to combine these two examples into one, with all the
text above,
> so that the space given to this detail is not so excessive.

I'll try it.

> I love the second person imperative.  (Please don't change it to "the
visibility
> can be overridden" just because I pointed it out.)

:) OK

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