Web: Text-input: make LM reference more friendly. (issue 51460043)

[lilyliska]

Reviewers: ,

Message:
How about that?

It doesn't include David's latest suggestions (because I was already
ready with it).

This suggestion is merely a kind of "in-place" rewrite, but
of course I'd also incorporate the more verbose suggestion
(particularly as I will be working on this
Text input -> Editing -> Editors/environments structure.

Description:
Web: Text-input: make LM reference more friendly.

I think putting it this way sounds less defensive or
arrogant.

I think it is better to combine the two paragraphs because
this section was somewhat jaggy.

Please review this at https://codereview.appspot.com/51460043/

Affected files (+3, -5 lines):
  M Documentation/web/introduction.itexi


Index: Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
diff --git a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi  
b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
index  
9e7265cda9d8296c7c8ca070ffede157cff9c39a..9017293d36a192cb579873deb0082d001f8c3efb  
100644
--- a/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
+++ b/Documentation/web/introduction.itexi
@@ -1135,11 +1135,9 @@ We realize that many users find this way of entering  
music a bit
 odd.  For this reason, we have written extensive documentation to
 help new users, beginning with @ref{Learning}.  The Learning
 Manual is the best place to start, as many questions are answered
-before they come up!
-
-Please read the Learning Manual before complaining about bugs!
-New users occasionally believe that LilyPond is not working
-correctly, when in fact it is working precisely as designed.
+before they come up!  Occasionally new users are unnecessarily
+irritated by some aspects of LilyPond's behaviour.  Please read
+this manual before doubting whether LilyPond is working correctly.

 More in-depth information is available in @ref{Manuals}.