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Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by addr
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graham |
Subject: |
Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by address@hidden) |
Date: |
Thu, 22 Dec 2016 14:21:58 -0800 |
https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi
File Documentation/web/community.itexi (right):
https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi#newcode434
Documentation/web/community.itexi:434: every bug can be demonstrated in
four lines of code or less!}
Hmm, I think "four notes" is shorter (and easier to understand) than
"four lines of codes". I mean, people can stuff a lot of extra material
into four lines of code!
The place that discusses "four lines of code" in Tiny examples is at the
bottom of a longer explanation about the process. As such, I think it
serves a different purpose. The main point of this @warning{} is to get
people to look at "Tiny examples".
https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi#newcode498
Documentation/web/community.itexi:498: any activity on the bug occurs.
For that, just click the envelope
I would replace ". For that, just click" with "by clicking". So that
area would be:
... any activity on the bug occurs, by clicking the envelope symbol...
https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/
- Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by address@hidden),
graham <=