Re: Two small amendments to Doc/web/community.itexi (issue 319880043 by address@hidden)

[Simon Albrecht]

On 22.12.2016 23:21, address@hidden wrote:
> https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi 
>
> File Documentation/web/community.itexi (right):
>
> https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi#newcode434 
>
> Documentation/web/community.itexi:434: every bug can be demonstrated in
> four lines of code or less!}
> Hmm, I think "four notes" is shorter (and easier to understand) than
> "four lines of codes".

All right, change reverted.

> https://codereview.appspot.com/319880043/diff/1/Documentation/web/community.itexi#newcode498 
>
> Documentation/web/community.itexi:498: any activity on the bug occurs.
> For that, just click the envelope
> I would replace ".  For that, just click" with "by clicking".  So that
> area would be:
>
> ... any activity on the bug occurs, by clicking the envelope symbol...

I didn’t want to separate the ‘by clicking’ so much from the ‘subscribe’ 
to which it refers,
so I chose yet another wording I hope you’ll agree to.

Best, Simon