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Re: First Mutopia contribution -- looking for some critique


From: Noeck
Subject: Re: First Mutopia contribution -- looking for some critique
Date: Tue, 21 Jan 2014 18:34:23 +0100
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Hi Gonçalo,

to me it looks nice. Thanks!

Some small comments:

- The piano dynamics would look better if they were centered between
  the piano staffs.

- The horizontal positioning of dynamics is related:
  Why do you use this?
    \once \override DynamicText.X-offset = #-4
  Usually dynamics should be centred on the note they belong to
  (especially for piano music where you can’t increase the volume
  during the chord, for example mf measure 21).

- I would prefer one of №, Nº or No. instead of nº (capital N as the
  other text is also German)

- it should read: doppelt (dop -- pelt), one p too much

Thanks for sharing it.
Joram



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