RE: [Heartlogic-dev] OHL v2 alpha test

[William L. Jarrold]

On Mon, 21 Mar 2005, Josh White wrote:

> Nice work Josh!  This layout works, I think.  Nice use of white space.
>
> Suggestion:  Can you make the 5 ratings buttons instead of radio selections,
> and remove the rate it! button? That will cut down one button click.

* I agree with Josh.

* most of the text i had no idea what it meant....e.g. this...

"orange juice is a matter of might (as opposed to law)."

...huh?  might, as in might makes right instead of rule by law, or
some stretched metaphical logic or what?

well, maybe this is a sign of "its just alpha."

* as you prolly recall, in the dissertation, what you have as "story" was
split up into "overriding goal" and "situation."  it might be better to
keep that distinction.  i'm not sure.

* regarding "tortured prose". e.g. this...

In tobys opinion, his dad wants to avoid something about orange juice for 
himself. (TODO: how to disambiguate whom the trailing himself/herself 
refers without tortured prose?)

...those seem like issues that are very tightly intertwined with the tasks 
of re-building the model, aligning the model with CLib (e.g. in my model
I used the term gender but in CLib they use sex).  I would not work on 
any detailed KM model stuff until we decide how tightly we want to align 
with CLib.  (I'm assuming you know that KM has a text gen facility and 
are using that to generate the text and not your own hand-rolled text 
gen system).

Bill


> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: address@hidden
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> >  On Behalf Of Joshua N Pritikin
> > Sent: Monday, March 21, 2005 5:06 AM
> > To: address@hidden
> > Subject: [Heartlogic-dev] OHL v2 alpha test
> >
> >
> > Visit:
> >
> >   http://ohl.nirmalvihar.info/
> >
> > This is running from my home machine which is not always up
> > due to the shortage of electricity in Maharashtra.  If you
> > don't get it, try again at a different time of day.
> >
> > When you test out the site, try all the different levels.
> > You'll be able to change levels after completing the first 2
> > or 3 ratings.
> >
> > None of the buttons at the top work, including the "Login In" button.
> > Remember: this is an alpha test.  Don't expect too much.
> >
> > As usual, comments are welcome.
>
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