Re: [pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes

[Jeffrey Oldham]

        Would someone be willing to review these proposed changes or
tell me if I missed a reply email?

Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden

On Wed, Mar 21, 2001 at 12:42:49PM -0800, Jeffrey Oldham wrote:
> Attached are proposed changes to some of the Pooma tutorials in
> r2/docs.  Most are minor typographical changes.  More questionable
> changes are annotated with "?" in the left column below.
> 
> OK to commit?
> 
> Wed Mar 21 12:03:54 2001  Jeffrey D. Oldham <address@hidden>
> 
>       * background.html (struct AddOp): Match parameter name with
>       parameter use.
>       (struct MulOp): Likewise.
>       * tut-02.html: Add several missing spaces.
> ?     (RBJacobi): Change array's name to match previous line.
>       (Periodic Boundary Conditions): Fix line numbers for ApplyPeriodic.
>       * tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
>       next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
>       forwarding.
>       Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma.  Add a missing
>       parenthesis.  Fix array's name to match the other text.
> ?     Emphasize "ghost," which is implicitly defined.
> ?     Reword last sentence to de\"{e}mphasize Pooma developers' programming
>       expertise.
>       (accumulateWithLoop): Substitute "first0" and "last0" for "f0" and
>       "l0". "l0" looks like the number 10.
>       Remove some extraneous words.
>       * tut-06.html: "Recurring," not "recursing."
>       * tut-07.html: Remove extraneous word.  Fix a comma.  Fix
>       capitalization.  Remove one of double word.
>       Add space between closing ">" in nested template.
> ?     s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g
>       Change expression font to typewriter.
>       s/>/</ in line 016 of n-D scalar advection.
> ?     * tut-08.html: (average): Change second "Expression1_t" to
>       "Expression2_t".
>       (Exported typedefs): Remove second, extraneous
>       "SurfaceNormalsArray_t".
>       Fix typo.  Remove second of two contiguous periods.  Remove second
>       of repeated world.
>       Suggested substitution s/right/correct/ to avoid confusion with
>       "left".
> ?     (FieldStencil example): Add ending ";".  s/fv/vv/ to match
>       previous variable declaration.
>       Fix misspelled words.  Add period at the end of a sentence.
> 
> Thanks,
> Jeffrey D. Oldham
> address@hidden

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