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[RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes
From: |
Jeffrey Oldham |
Subject: |
[RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes |
Date: |
Wed, 21 Mar 2001 12:42:49 -0800 |
User-agent: |
Mutt/1.2.5i |
Attached are proposed changes to some of the Pooma tutorials in
r2/docs. Most are minor typographical changes. More questionable
changes are annotated with "?" in the left column below.
OK to commit?
Wed Mar 21 12:03:54 2001 Jeffrey D. Oldham <address@hidden>
* background.html (struct AddOp): Match parameter name with
parameter use.
(struct MulOp): Likewise.
* tut-02.html: Add several missing spaces.
? (RBJacobi): Change array's name to match previous line.
(Periodic Boundary Conditions): Fix line numbers for ApplyPeriodic.
* tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
forwarding.
Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma. Add a missing
parenthesis. Fix array's name to match the other text.
? Emphasize "ghost," which is implicitly defined.
? Reword last sentence to de\"{e}mphasize Pooma developers' programming
expertise.
(accumulateWithLoop): Substitute "first0" and "last0" for "f0" and
"l0". "l0" looks like the number 10.
Remove some extraneous words.
* tut-06.html: "Recurring," not "recursing."
* tut-07.html: Remove extraneous word. Fix a comma. Fix
capitalization. Remove one of double word.
Add space between closing ">" in nested template.
? s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g
Change expression font to typewriter.
s/>/</ in line 016 of n-D scalar advection.
? * tut-08.html: (average): Change second "Expression1_t" to
"Expression2_t".
(Exported typedefs): Remove second, extraneous
"SurfaceNormalsArray_t".
Fix typo. Remove second of two contiguous periods. Remove second
of repeated world.
Suggested substitution s/right/correct/ to avoid confusion with
"left".
? (FieldStencil example): Add ending ";". s/fv/vv/ to match
previous variable declaration.
Fix misspelled words. Add period at the end of a sentence.
What is the right way to check these changes? Running tidy(1)
(http://www.w3.org/People/Raggett/tidy/) on background.html yielded
thirty warnings and errors. On tut-07.html it yielded seventy errors.
Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden
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