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[RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes


From: Jeffrey Oldham
Subject: [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes
Date: Wed, 21 Mar 2001 12:42:49 -0800
User-agent: Mutt/1.2.5i

Attached are proposed changes to some of the Pooma tutorials in
r2/docs.  Most are minor typographical changes.  More questionable
changes are annotated with "?" in the left column below.

OK to commit?

Wed Mar 21 12:03:54 2001  Jeffrey D. Oldham <address@hidden>

        * background.html (struct AddOp): Match parameter name with
        parameter use.
        (struct MulOp): Likewise.
        * tut-02.html: Add several missing spaces.
?       (RBJacobi): Change array's name to match previous line.
        (Periodic Boundary Conditions): Fix line numbers for ApplyPeriodic.
        * tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
        next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
        forwarding.
        Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma.  Add a missing
        parenthesis.  Fix array's name to match the other text.
?       Emphasize "ghost," which is implicitly defined.
?       Reword last sentence to de\"{e}mphasize Pooma developers' programming
        expertise.
        (accumulateWithLoop): Substitute "first0" and "last0" for "f0" and
        "l0". "l0" looks like the number 10.
        Remove some extraneous words.
        * tut-06.html: "Recurring," not "recursing."
        * tut-07.html: Remove extraneous word.  Fix a comma.  Fix
        capitalization.  Remove one of double word.
        Add space between closing ">" in nested template.
?       s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g
        Change expression font to typewriter.
        s/>/</ in line 016 of n-D scalar advection.
?       * tut-08.html: (average): Change second "Expression1_t" to
        "Expression2_t".
        (Exported typedefs): Remove second, extraneous
        "SurfaceNormalsArray_t".
        Fix typo.  Remove second of two contiguous periods.  Remove second
        of repeated world.
        Suggested substitution s/right/correct/ to avoid confusion with
        "left".
?       (FieldStencil example): Add ending ";".  s/fv/vv/ to match
        previous variable declaration.
        Fix misspelled words.  Add period at the end of a sentence.

What is the right way to check these changes?  Running tidy(1)
(http://www.w3.org/People/Raggett/tidy/) on background.html yielded
thirty warnings and errors.  On tut-07.html it yielded seventy errors.

Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
address@hidden

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