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Re: [pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes
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Jeffrey Oldham |
Subject: |
Re: [pooma-dev] [RFA]: Tutorial Typographical Changes |
Date: |
Mon, 26 Mar 2001 15:54:24 -0800 |
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Mutt/1.2.5i |
Thanks for the comments.
On Mon, Mar 26, 2001 at 02:44:28PM -0800, Allan Stokes wrote:
>
> Review of Jeffrey's patch. Everything seems fine. Didn't understand
> implication of s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g so this is not confirmed. Two
> small suggestions (one on EngineTag, one about "Pooma code").
I backed out the s/VectorFace/VectorFaceRCTag/g and will await someone
else's comments.
> > * tut-04.html: Move sentence regarding component forwarding from
> > next paragraph to preceding paragraph concerning component
> > forwarding.
>
> 404,411 all I see here is the lexemes "<a" moved to the end of the previous
> line.
> Assuming this is spurious.
Yes, just overzealous Emacs's paragraph refilling.
> OK on 413,430
>
> > Remove an extra space and an extraneous comma. Add a missing
> > parenthesis. Fix array's name to match the other text.
>
> <tt>EngineTag</tt> is still mentioned in the descriptive text. Maybe better
> to remove <tt> emphasis and just say "input EngineTag" meaning <tt>E</tt>
I am not sure how to word this.
Thanks,
Jeffrey D. Oldham
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