[Heartlogic-dev] wording of story itesm

[William L. Jarrold]

Joshua,

The jack and jill story items need to be made more readable.  That was
one of the outcomes of having my pal Dayna look through the study
items.

Here's my proposals...

(1)
REPLACE...

In Jacks opinion, Jill is indifferent about a pale of water for herself.

...WITH...

Jack believess, that Jill feels indifferent about fetching herself a
pale of water.

(2)
REPLACE...

In Jacks opinion, Jill wants to avoid something about a pale of water for 
herself.

...WITH...

Jacks believes that Jill wants to avoid fetching herself a pale of
water.

Hope that helps,

Bill