Re: [Fsfe-uk] Re: Associate status application

[MJ Ray]

OK, random comments follow.  Consume with bag of salt.

Marc Eberhard <address@hidden> wrote:
>  The FSF Europe gladly announces that the UK based "Association for Free

Suggest a different adverb than gladly.  Maybe "proudly"?  Minor, so don't
worry too much about it.

>  AFFS has joined the FSF Europe to actively support its activities and
> work for Free Software in Europe and to facilitate cooperation with
> organisations in other countries.

 AFFS has joined the FSF Europe to actively support its activities, to work
for Free Software in Europe and to facilitate cooperation with organisations
in other countries.

> institutions, politicians and - of course - the public in the UK to help
> creating a critical mass of people using Free Software.

"help create"

>  "Although the AFFS is based in the UK, it fully recognises and appreciates,

Drop the end of line comma.

> cooperation and coordination. The association with the FSF Europe is
> probably the most important step for the AFFS to achieve this goal." said

"most important step yet" maybe?

Who wants to volunteer a phone number?  Can use mine if needed.