Re: [Fsfe-uk] BBC News partnership with Microsoft

[Clive Menzies]

On (01/10/06 21:27), Simon Morris wrote:
> On Sat, 2006-09-30 at 10:38 +0100, Simon Morris wrote:
> 
> > 
> > http://beerandspeech.org/fsfe/bbc-ms-deal/
> > 
> > Please review the first draft and make recommendations.
> 
> > 
> I've posted a second draft online.
> 
> Fixed is the poor grammar (thanks :-)) and I've added a paragraph about
> Vorbis and software patents towards the end of the letter
> 
> Thanks
> 
> ~sm

Better still.  A comma at the end of line 1 para 3 wouldn't go amiss.

Good luck

Clive

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