Re: Request for feedback on 'lobbying' paper

[David Rogers]

David Kastrup <address@hidden> writes:

> Peter Wannemacher <address@hidden> writes:

>> ======================
>> You wrote on page 4:
>> Editor independent
>> There isn’t a inseparable unit between editing and processing a docu-
>>
>> It is common to write:
>> There isn't an inseparable unit
>
> And not "between" but rather "of editing and processing".


Or even "Editing a document and processing it are not an inseparable
unit."

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David R